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Xinxiang backstreets in hard rain.
People at every junction,
walking in and out of my ears.
Dancing their bee dance in the
margins of returning light.
I wrap my coat around you.
A personal memory of lost hope,
burned in the zig-zags, runs
and circles of a fire spun moment.
Great imagery and atmosphere. I love the image of people waling in and out of ears. The feeling of loss is heavy in this piece – a sharp juxtaposition to the beautiful flow with which it is written.
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Thank you for these kind words.
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You are kindly welcome.
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